Cosmogyral

United States

'Cosmogyral' means to twirl around the universe but i like when people call me cosmo. Hi, I'm Caleb Sa, nice to meet you.

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"T temperature is unbearable until you face it."

someone will call me by the name of a monster

May 3, 2021

FREE WRITING

12
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A collection of poems under one title.

十五

in the violent torrent
it's best to remember
you may not actually be
alone.
neither despairing nor uplifting. i wanted this to have the haunting casualness my favorite poems of this collection seem to hold. 

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  • Paisley Blue

    yes, haunting casualness is a great way to describe this. it's almost reassuring, but the tone is so almost emotionless that it made me shiver. wow, you're doing what you always do -- twisting the meaning until i don't even know who i am :) love love love your poetry as always!!


    7 months ago
  • Yellow Sweater

    It does have a haunting casualness! What a great way to describe it. Definitely one of my favorites. Wonderful work, as always Caleb.


    7 months ago
  • Awesome Sienna

    Beautiful! I know that sounds so generic, but I really mean it!


    7 months ago