Ava Marie

Canada

Hi I'm Ava
15
She/Her

Aspiring Author
Dancer
Rock Climber

Always laughing
Beatlemaniac
Favourite book: The Book Thief by Markus Zusak
Bad jokes are the best!
I draw occasionally
I love constructive criticism!

Joined: 11/14/2020

Message to Readers

Thank you all so much for 116 followers!!!! Also, the Q&A I mentioned in the footnotes is actually not going to be a Q&A, just something similar where I can share stuff about myself, because it turns out you're not allowed to do Q&A's on WtW, which is A-Okay. Still feel free to ask me questions, because I will answer them.

Senses and Seasons (See Footnotes, and then Message Board)

May 7, 2021

FREE WRITING

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I love the sound of spring at midnight,
The pitter-patter of the rain against the roof.
The tiny splashes play atop the clouds,
In amongst the dancing stars.
Relaxed, 
Relieved, 
Reinvented,
I lay under my blanket.
Listening quietly,
Until I fall asleep.

I love the smell of summer mornings,
The freshness of the air.
A smile on my face,
As the dew on the grass,
Slowly fades away.
It’s then,
In the perfect coolness of the world,
That I can find peace.

I love the sight of a crisp autumn afternoon,
Red and Orange leaves scattered on the ground.
A path made just for me,
As I run down it,
Laughing.
The cold cuts down my throat,
Sharp, yet I’m having too much fun to stop.
The smell of winter coming quickly,
Is faint among the spices that reside in the air,
So I’ve got to enjoy every moment I’ve got.

I love the feel of winter evenings,
Curled up by the fire,
The ground covered in snow.
Hot coco,
Burning a path of comfort inside my chest.
Solemn happiness washes over you,
As you close your eyes.
It’s peaceful,
But you don’t sleep,
You still have a few more chapters to read.
I started writing this a few days ago and just finished it now, it was really quite fun. I haven't had a whole lot of time to write lately, so it was quite satisfying when the words for this just seemed to flow out of me. Anyways, I hope you all like it!!! 
On a different note, thank you everyone for over 100 followers!!!! This community is the best, you guys are who encourage me to keep writing. And so in celebration and thanks, I am stealing SamRose's idea (go check out her writing, she is extremely talented!!!) by doing a Q&A. So if you have any questions for me, feel free to leave them in the comments of this piece!!!

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12 Comments
  • Awesome Sienna

    Re: Great! I'll look forward to seeing the answers! Oh, right, yeah! Thanks for that! I didn't even notice! :]


    about 1 month ago
  • Awesome Sienna

    Lovely! It gave me such nice feelings when I read this! Congratulations on 100!
    Question time:
    What is the best part about writing?
    If you could have a superpower, what would it be?
    What is one thing that you have always wanted to do?
    What colour would you die you hair if you ever did?
    What animal do you want to be?
    Would you rather live in a world of aliens or a world of ai robots?
    Sorry bout all of the questions! You don't have to answer all of them if you don't want to!


    about 1 month ago
  • serein

    re: of course!!
    And no problem lol it just goes to show what a talented writer you are :D


    about 1 month ago
  • domain.expansion

    reply: Thank you so much , I'm glad you liked my piece, "Death's perspective." I actually started the book thief for school and my piece was based on it. Also I really love the piece you wrote and how it portrays a feeling of comfort.


    about 1 month ago
  • ANSON REYNOLDS

    "But you don’t sleep,/You still have a few more chapters to read." ohhhhh my granolaaa I love that XD It's so relatable <3 Also, I adore your "Unknown" quote---it's fabulous


    about 1 month ago
  • McK13

    First off, I love the poem! Brilliantly written :) And secondly, congrats on 100, now 112 followers!! (I can't believe I didn't find you until now! Better late than never though) That's HUGE!! Yayayayayay :) Also, The Book Thief is one of my all-time favorite books as well!! I've read it twice already and ironically, I just started reading it for a third time a few days ago!
    Here are some questions:
    1. What is your favorite tv show/movie and why?
    2. What emoji do you use the most?
    3. What are three words you would use to describe yourself and why?
    4. What's your dream vacation?
    5. And, what about a dream career?


    about 1 month ago
  • FantasyOtter12

    Congrats!!


    about 1 month ago
  • serein

    Oof sorry just read the rest of the footnotes and CONGRATS ON 100+!!! I have a couple of questions (the first one is very fitting for these circumstances)
    1). What is your favorite season and why?
    2) I ask this to everyone but what is you favorite song lyric and why?
    3) How did you get into writing (or how did you discover that you liked it?)


    about 1 month ago
  • serein

    AAAAAAAH stop it rained today and it was absolutely the loveliest thing!! You captured each of the seasons most beautiful parts...making me nostalgic for some reason? i'm not sure. But winter was one of my favorites, especially the hot cocoa part: "Burning a path of comfort down my chest" is such an interesting but cozy way to describe it!! Winter is my favorite season, so now I'm just missing it even more than ever :D


    about 1 month ago
  • Tachi

    Wow! this is awesome! Reading this made me smile :D


    about 1 month ago
  • Ellington Stone

    Really good!! Each line seems so thought out and purposeful.


    about 1 month ago
  • Just_A_Memory

    This piece is fabulous! And congrats on 100(&9) I’m dry out of questions, but if I think of some good ones, I’ll let you know!


    about 1 month ago