Wierd_short_starbucksgirl

Nigeria

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Aylah

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scars dont heal...nor do they bleed

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bonito flakes.....

i once loved

April 27, 2021

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You gave me butterflies,
i think i once saw butter fly,
I lost my self in your eyes,
you were my apple pie.


Even though i'm 5'3 and you are 6'5,
With you i was up in the skies,
thought you were an angel in disguise,
but it was to me you told all those lies.


Between the kisses and the fights,
and our fairytale like nights,
I thought we'd be together till old,
alas, not all that glitters is gold.



Now that i look back to the memories we made,
they seem to have withered away along with my pain,
we never did speak again,
After the day we parted ways.




 
hi umm the poem is a bit disjoint and rough around the edges but i just wanna put it out there might post an edited version when i'm in the writing mood.....thanks for reading

yours weirdly,
wierd_short_starbucksgirl

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3 Comments
  • Busssy.Beee

    oh wow, the way each line advances towards the ending, it just absolutely amazing! i especially love the lines, "With you i was up in the skies, / thought you were an angel in disguise," Gosh, i just love the way you pair the two lines together in the stanza!


    5 months ago
  • Wierd_short_starbucksgirl

    Nyla thanks so much......wasnt really sure about the writing so thanks


    5 months ago
  • Nyla

    Aw, I like this poem. The content is sad but the way you wrote it was really great! I love the foreshadowing that something wasn’t what it seems by pairing kisses and fights together!


    5 months ago