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Spy

By: Luke


PROMPT: Countdown

He runs down the long dark hallway. He jumps and jumps from wall to wall. I have no idea what is happening. He grabs a tiny, little pistol out of his long dark pants. He quickly, but extremely quietly pulls it up into a firing position and bang bang bang, he fell to the ground. 



Peer Review

it sounds pretty awesome but he died


how the spy jumps from wall to wall


that it is about spys and what they do


Reviewer Comments

i like this little story my favorite part is when he gets done jumping off the walls and pulls his gun out pf his black dark pants