Treblemaker

United States

I write because the music of language spoke to me in books and I wanted to make a beautiful noise to answer back -- Lee Martin

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The noblest art is that of making others happy- PT Barnum

Secrete Child of Apollo, Aquarius, 17

In love with Mint Ice cream but all ice cream is greatly appreciated

Favorite TV show is the Umbrella Academy

You are braver than you think, kinder than you seem, and smarter than you know.

Joined 10/5/2020

To My Other Half

April 17, 2021

FREE WRITING

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write me a sonnet for my other half
the part of my heart I've yet given
and has instead been locked
in safe with key,
sing a sweet tune for my lover and me.

Tell me his name, are his eyes green or gold?
Strum out a tune as he dances and
holds my hands and my heart and my head on his chest
pluck me a tune of our love at its best.

When does he get here, when do I know?
that this guy walking by is the rest of my 
soul, stuck together in life until death do us part
does he rescue me or do I be the knight?

Does he like to wear colors, and dance all the time
Please paint me a picture of his sorrows and 
mine, as we conversate late oh so late in the night
my friend, my companion, my person for life.

Please write me a sonnet for my other half
Tell him my heart I will keep till he has
let down his hair while I climb to his tower,
tell him I can't wait for that cosmic hour. 

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2 Comments
  • Charisse Marison

    This brought tears to my eyes. It's so poetic and beautiful and- this may sound weird- but it's really graceful? Like, it has a really nice flow to it and it's so perfectly smooth! That's probably weird, but anyways, great job :)


    23 days ago
  • Ava Marie

    This is so good, so beautiful, I love it!!!


    23 days ago