Rachaelgrace

United States

Follower of Jesus
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Ice Blue

April 15, 2021

FREE WRITING

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they say that the eyes are the window to the soul
which is why I study yours so intently
ice blue like the clear sky
on a cold winter's morning

sometimes when horrible things happen
and good things happen at the same time
I can't quite tell which is more disturbing
wouldn't it be wonderful
if things just fit
instead of following a chaotic blizzard of fear?
wouldn't it be wonderful if the sky was clear?






 

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6 Comments
  • nolongeractive

    Re: Omg thank you so much!! And I just read that poem and it is so amazing, thank you so much for the recommendation.


    5 months ago
  • nolongeractive

    Re: Omg thank you so much!!


    5 months ago
  • Nyla

    Awww this is a really sweet poem. I love how you describe this person's eyes with the same descriptions you hope for afterwards (that makes like no sense but just know, this was really beautifully done!)
    RE: Aww thank you! I’m so glad!
    Uhh, not now but before COVID I was on my school’s rugby 7s and badminton team and I was going to try out for soccer but then COVID :( Do you play any sports?


    5 months ago
  • Sophiascb

    re-thank you! I think I am going to enter that one in the comp <3


    5 months ago
  • Emi

    I like how you used the ice reference later on in the poem; it seemed to fit well. This is a great piece!


    5 months ago
  • Sophiascb

    I love this! So so gorgeous. I'm just in love with the first stanza, specifically first two lines. "they say that the eyes are the window to the soul which is why I study yours so intently" Beautiful work!


    5 months ago