BizzleWrites

Australia

I'm Issy.
I'm 14 and an aspiring artist and author.
She/her
Black Lives matter.
Likes:
Bi puns
Murder mystery TV shows
Art
Shakespeare poetry
Dislikes:
I can't even be bothered writing them all down
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Goodbi
Have a nice day

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Remember to write even if you think you are bad at it, you're not

Green Eyes

April 14, 2021

She looked at me, then looked away. 

Her green eyes sparkled with tears as she and I locked eyes. Then before I could say something, she turned away, holding back sobs. 

Her green green eyes sparkled with suppressed tears as she and I locked eyes. There was some sort of mutual understanding; this would be goodbye. She turned away, so I couldn't see her pale face as she held back sobs.
I know the final version isn't perfect, but I tried. 

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