sixteen, sapphic, they/she
Written By: panda!
April 18, 2021
PROMPT: Poetry and Spoken Word Competition: 2021
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Hey, I see you haven't been active in a while. Hope you're doing ok <3
this is so well done! i love the formatting with the line breaks, too!
re: thanks so much for your review! i just made some edits!
You did great on this!
re: thats good to know! I hadn't known and so I didnt want to assume in the writing, but thank you for letting me know!
RE: Thank you!
Oh my gosh, this is so beautifully written! I'm so excited to work with you as a CA-- see you in July!
Hi again! I was just wondering, have you joined the CA chat? Saanvi and I have, but I haven't seen you comment there :) Just wanted to check!
Re: Oh thank you! I love your username, it's so cuteee!
Re: Aww thank you! Do you mind me asking who you are? I'm trying to connect faces with usernames :')
Ah, here's another CA! Me and SunV have been trying to find you all! :')
This is so beautiful! It's so vivid and I love the imagery in your writing.
Also, I saw your peer review on my poem earlier and I just want to thank you for all the encouragement and advice! I really appreciate the time you took to write that out for me. I looked up some resources like you said, specifically enjambment because I had no idea what it was. Side note- I was actually thinking about the Kathak studio I dance at while writing it because I miss it so much that it sounds almost magical when I think about it.
Anyway, sorry to make this comment more about me than your poem, I'm new on here and wasn't sure how to directly reply to the peer review.
Wow...this is just gorgeous. The wording and the imagery are just wonderful.
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