Peer Review by Mak Shepherd

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The Universe

By: Kaitlen Fagan

PROMPT: Countdown

A billion stars swirl into a blazing cloud of light

Filled with midnight black but bright as the day

World upon world filled with striking celestial color

Made of a billion vividly bursting stars

The teetering edge of the imagination

No binding laws, only inspiration

No geometry or physics

It is boundless

The universe


Peer Review

The mood/tone of this piece is calming and sounds somewhat passionate.

I'm impressed by your word choice. You use very good, interesting words like celestial or blazing.

I want to keep reading this because you use interesting words that draw me in. This is a very interesting writing.

Reviewer Comments

You really capture my attention. I really like it. Good job Katie! You're such a great writer!