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The mood/tone of this piece is calming and sounds somewhat passionate.
I'm impressed by your word choice. You use very good, interesting words like celestial or blazing.
I want to keep reading this because you use interesting words that draw me in. This is a very interesting writing.
You really capture my attention. I really like it. Good job Katie! You're such a great writer!