SamRose

United States

She/her
15
Ravenclaw
LDS
Fairykind
Homeschooler
Artist (trying to be)
Writer/Aspiring Author
Bookworm
Siberian Husky Owner (Sky)
Parakeet Owner (Haven)
Horseback Rider
Daughter of Athena
Team Leo (Lol)
Joined 11/2020

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Thank you for taking the time to read my work!

Currently working on two series:
*Kingdom on a Cloud
*The Other Side (collab w/VirginaTechGirl101)
Read them PLEASE! XD

Talk to me about Harry Potter, Percy Jackson, Fablehaven, Beyonders, Five Kingdoms, Anne of Green Gables, :)

After you're done here, go read my real-life friend BriRiley's writing! And my WtW friends Ava Marie and VirginiaTechGirl101! They are all super talented. :)

Proud member and Co-President of the Cult of the Crunch (ask (sk)eyesofocher for more info)

Don't hesitate to ask if you want a review, comment, whatever! I love getting to know all the awesome writers on here, and helping you any way I can!

Want to collab? Just let me know! I'd love to! :)

A Better Place

April 20, 2021

The world seems to improve each day
But that is just illusion;
You need to understand
A different conclusion

People suffer right and left
Lies are told, vows are broken
People rarely take the time; 
And live their lives unspoken

Kind actions go un-acted
And hello's go unsaid
I wish I could say otherwise
But too many tears have been shed.

All these seem so depressing,
But there's something you can do
You can wave and say "Hello,
I'm having a good day, are you?"

You can smile at those who need it
And give when and where you can
When you walk down the sidewalk
Say thanks to the mailman

It doesn't have to be big,
It's not a mountain to climb;
Make the world a better place
One kind word at a time.
I added some new punctuation and changed a couple lines, please let me know if it works! Not in a peer review though please, in a comment, or else I won't get it on time. I want to submit this tonight, so PLEASE let me know if you think it migh tbe ready! And let me know if there are any last minute changes I should make! Tysm!

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  • Ava Marie

    Okay, one this is so good!!
    Two, the pieces I would like peer reviewed are:
    https://writetheworld.com/groups/1/shared/226806/version/479374
    and
    https://writetheworld.com/groups/1/shared/217263/version/462148


    18 days ago
  • BriRiley

    Greta job! This has come such a long way!! I love it! XD ;)


    18 days ago