Hailie Ogden

United States

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Writing=life

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I think that no one sucks at writing, the first draft is always going to be messy and criticized, but the best writers pull through it and revise their writing until they believe its perfect.

Villain's In Every Love Story

April 11, 2021

FREE WRITING

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Panic
It fills your insides
Making it hard
To breathe
Everything slows
Makes you believe
That a second
Is an eternity
Makes you feel alone
Anxiety comes
Hand in hand with Panic
Causing belief that
Everything will go wrong
They are the villain's
In every love story
But who are the heroes?

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3 Comments
  • nolongeractive

    This is so amazing and I love the idea so much, it is really cool! I am obsessed with the word choice in this and I cannot get over your talent! I cannot wait to see what else you write!


    5 months ago
  • Stone of Jade

    this is great. this pov is always so so interesting to read. great job with this!


    5 months ago
  • Nyla

    Awww I really like this message- the ending has got me thinking! "belief that/Everything will go wrong" that was really true! Also, I totally agree with your message box (lol, that's probably a sign that I should start drafting my work instead of posting the first thing that pops in my head XD)


    5 months ago