Written By: Aly Moosa
April 20, 2021
PROMPT: Poetry and Spoken Word Competition: 2021
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What a wonderful poem! I love the vivid imagery you've used, and the sustained metaphor of incorporating nature into your writing.
I think you've written a very timely poem about a relevant issue.
I don't know how to describe how utterly beautiful and heart-wrenchingly powerful this piece - and your flawless performance - is. Just know that I think this should be played on international TV - that I think it should be heard by everyone - because it is a gift to the world that needs to be shared.
This is AMAZING!!!!!!!!
Stunning. Terribly beautiful. "I am a product of foreign love" ... the way you paused! "I am just a guest in this cemetery" I felt like this line, as something the comp intro said all good has poetry, was "an anchor dropped down into wholeness." Sorry for my rambling, I am still shook.
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