nolongeractive

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the sun is lonely and still shines

April 10, 2021

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There is a reason you can't spell 'alone' without 'one'
And, there is a reason you can't spell 'sun' without 'u'

The sun is lonely and it still shines
Who says I can’t do the same?
And, I am often alone
But, I can make it on my own
‘Cause, the sun is lonely and it still shines

For light, we look to the sun up in the sky
But, its fire keeps the stars from saying, “Hi!”
My friends say they’ll keep in touch
And, they never miss me much
I am doing fine

The sun is lonely and it still shines
Who says I can’t do the same?
And, I am often alone
But, I can make it on my own
‘Cause, the sun is lonely and it still shines

I really am too good at being mean
I copy what the villains do on-screen
I’m just doing me
And, if the sun had a light switch
It could rest, not please the public
I am alright
 
After 16 years, look how I’ve turned out
The sun is lonely and it still shines
Who says I can’t do the same?
And, I am often alone
But, I can make it on my own

‘Cause, the sun is lonely and it still shines
I look to the sun to find answers in the sky
And, it makes my eyes water, every time
The world’s expensive, but, self-love has no fee
With 8 planets that orbit the sun
Pluto’s alone, but I’ll bet he has fun
Just like the sun, with the day, I wish I could leave

The sun is lonely and it still shines
I know I can do the same
I like being alone
I feel best on my own
‘Cause, the sun is lonely and it still shines
The sun is lonely and it still shines

The sun is lonely and it still shines

I am lonely but I still shine
Hey, everyone! Here is my new song, and I hope you all love it. It is kind of about how being lonely isn't always a bad thing, especially in my personal experiences. Lonely can be troubling, but it also can have many great benefits in the long run! I hope you all love this!

Also, I will be releasing more music coming up very soon from my debut album, METAPHORICAL MADNESS

Songs being released soon:

her

girlfriends

too young to be sad

ursula

Which are you guys most excited for?!

Much love!
Xo.

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9 Comments
  • ChimChim_1

    Im a little late but still...I LOVE THIS SONG!!


    30 days ago
  • aalawrites

    Wow. What a beautiful song, and I love the message around it that loneliness is ok!
    re: Thanks for commenting on my piece. I'm so glad you did, because now I got to read this amazing song, and I can't wait to see what you have in store from your album!


    about 1 month ago
  • Writing4Life

    And 'her'?


    about 1 month ago
  • Writing4Life

    May I be notified for 'too young to be sad'?


    about 1 month ago
  • jellybean568

    I really like the repetition of "the sun is lonely and it still shines" and especially the part with the light switch was so unique! Love the rhythm & rhyme


    about 1 month ago
  • Mespotz

    "I really am too good at being mean
    I copy what the villains do on-screen
    I’m just doing me
    And, if the sun had a light switch
    It could rest, not please the public
    I am alright"
    I liked that stanza a lot^^

    RE: Lol you read the character log like five times? Geez how many times would you read the story? Also, what's your favorite TS song?


    about 1 month ago
  • Ava Marie

    This is beautiful!!!
    Re: I'll probably add more to it, when she says something else insanely ridiculous that I actually remember.


    about 1 month ago
  • anemoia (#words)

    Oooh this was such an interesting way of looking at the sun. Simply profound. I could here this with some indie vibes, keeping it on the acoustic side and simple. Or maybe strings...


    about 1 month ago
  • ~rain~

    re: thanks so much! you're really talented too :) would you like me to notify you when there's another chapter?


    about 1 month ago