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thank you for reading as always
Um, yellow? That’s the best way I can describe happiness. The whole piece makes you feel warm and fuzzy, except the end line. It kinda adds a twinge of regret or bitter nostalgia at the end.
“And drip dots of damp on my back...” I love the alteration here, as well as how you described the water drops as “damp,” instead of “wet.” It has a really cool and unique ring to it.
I would like to hear more about your Nana. I know the towels are the center of the poem, but the towels belong to her.
You wore amazing poetry! I actually really like this and think it’s really sweet. Keep working hard!
Remember all my suggestion are optional, and feel free to completely disregard them XD. Great job with the piece!