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Oof I get desperate for names for some of these...

a tear

April 9, 2021

1. A tear slid down her face.

2. A tear slid down her face, but he gently wiped it off, with his rough, calloused finger.

3. A tear slid down her face, but he gently wiped it off, with his rough, calloused finger, as she whispered through coarse lips, "You're home, my son." They embraced.
 

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9 Comments
  • beth r.

    i-
    ok, i really like this style. the repetition, the ending. i adore it.
    re: 1. aw thanks for the comments!
    2. YES we stan him in this household
    3. metal? in a microwave? lol sAmE


    5 months ago
  • barelybear

    Serait* ? Oh dear


    5 months ago
  • barelybear

    Re: haha it would definitely be fun though :D
    Aw yay! I hope you enjoy yourself!! I’ve seen a few because there’s a local theatre that’s quite cheap, and I’ve seen a fair few amateur pantomimes ahah.
    I really want to see a musical in person!! Ça sera le pied!
    (Our French teacher keeps making us learn expressions of appreciation etc and that ones easiest to remember XD).


    5 months ago
  • barelybear

    Re: ooh I guess all I could possibly say to that is
    President John Adams. Good luck!
    (And yes haha learning lines is pretty fun :D)


    5 months ago
  • barelybear

    Re: ah yes sorry I do lose track a bit. I should make little profile cards with key info ahah. But yes I remember!! You said you really wanted to go, but it’s a really long way. Anyway, I still think it’s super cool!
    Hope you’ve had a great day!
    Ellie


    5 months ago
  • barelybear

    You’re learning French?! Yessss!!
    I love this so much! I was all prepared for it to be a tragic ending and that made me so much more happy when the reunion was revealed :D
    Re: why thank you, Adams c:


    5 months ago
  • Anne Blackwood

    Re: <3


    5 months ago
  • Anne Blackwood

    Re: Thank you!


    5 months ago
  • Nyla

    Awww I love how you wrote this with the sentences building on each other. It added so much to it and this story was really great too. Loll I love the title, another possible name could've been. "You're home" or something like that idk hehe


    5 months ago