resident philocalist

United States

sagittarius, dr pepper addict, INFP-T
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philocalist: a lover of beauty; someone who finds beauty in everyone and everything
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15yo
she/they please <3
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formerly dee's abditory

Message to Readers

ayyyyyyyyyyy macarena

our place

April 9, 2021

FREE WRITING

7
i tried not to come back when it was over
i tried to stay away dear i, did
but like a ghost you haunted me
and everything is hard to see
without your presence next to me

i tried to give you time to think it over
i tried to look okay dear i, did
but even after wandering 
and falling, and wondering
i still found myself sitting

in our place
too much space
without you
in my face
in our place
it was safe
but those days
are over
in our place


dadadada da da da
dadadada dadadadada
dadadada da da da
dadadada dadadadada


I tried not to let myself fall too hard
i tried to look away i did
but when you let your guard down
you feel perfect, you are right now
and i found myself wondering how

i tried to deny it at first
i tried to bury it down, deep down
but you were my whole heart
every inch and every scar
i knew you were my other part

in our place
too much space
without you
in my face
in our place
it was safe
but those days
are over 
in our place

dadadada da da da
dadadada dadadadada
dadadada da da da
dadadada dadadadada


i get why you left
love is hard for you


and you know i was
never good enough for you

but we could try, we could try, we could try

in our place
too much space
without you
in my face
in our place
it was safe
but those days
are over 
in our place


dadadada da da da
dadadada dadadadada
dadadada da da da
dadadada dadadadada
dadadada da da da
dadadada dadadadada
dadadada da da da
dadadada dadadadada...
one singer
different singer
both

thanks for the read! i really appreciate your comments. also, my prompt got selected for the april grab bag, so please check it out! i cant wait to see what you come up with!

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4 Comments
  • Paisley Blue

    hahahaaaa i love your new pfp!!!!

    also, this song..... gosh i can almost hear it in my head. do you have a melody/any sort of accompaniment? the harmonies would be BEAUTIFUL. wow this is gorgeous and so sweet and sad and wow :)


    6 months ago
  • Nyla

    Awwww I really love this! It was so sad and then it turned out really hopeful with this line, "but we could try, we could try, we could try" which btw with one singer and then the other and then both, I could really imagine it in my head and it sounded awesome! Also, I would try your prompt but I'm not really a songwriter XD!


    6 months ago
  • psithurism

    re: ohhhhhhh (i LOVE the new pfp)


    6 months ago
  • psithurism

    *whispers* what's glato?...


    6 months ago