Hold me in your hands while I cry the tears of salvation.
Let the salty droplets run down your wrinkled walnut fingers,
and hit the ground in an explosion of miniscule globules,
saturating the earth with the salty fragrance of the sea.
Wipe my eyes with the silken petals of a lily-flower.
Catch the streaks of fire trodden by the water of the ocean that mirrors the sadness of life and death;
let it soak into the frosty fronds and bring about spring's rejuvenation.
Kiss my cheek with your cracked, bleeding lips, a mouth smelling of awakening and determination.
Set me down as the pungent smell overwhelms me;
I fall down dizzily, only to get up back up and stray into a nightmare of deja-vu,
left only with the memory of a pair of gruff lips grazing my cheek.
So I obviously need a lot of help with this. I wanted to enter this in the competition, but it wasn't really in poem format (originally it looked like this). So I changed it a little, and I would really appreciate if someone would review this! I'll review any of your pieces :)
Also, title ideas. I have no idea what to name this, so if someone would help me with that I will love you forever :)
also do you think it would look better all in lowecase?