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The beginning of the poem is a bit depressing or sad. The way you describe society judging you is spot in, but that’s really not a happy thing. But the end of the poem— especially with the references to the stars— feels empowering in a sense, makes you feel happy or brave.
Definitely, “pulled not from your dictionary but from the stars...” That’s just beautiful! I love the contrast of the messed-up definitions and dictionary with cosmic words. It’s amazing!
I really can’t think of anything. I think you could describe the stars more if you wanted, but I think this is good the way it is.
Goshness, you are a great poetess! I absolutely love this. You really have a chance in the competition!
Great job! I really hope this is helpful, but feel free to disregard everything I’ve just wrote XD.