SamRose

United States

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15
Ravenclaw
LDS
Fairykind
Homeschooler
Artist (trying to be)
Writer/Aspiring Author
Bookworm
Siberian Husky Owner (Sky)
Parakeet Owner (Haven)
Horseback Rider
Daughter of Athena
Team Leo (Lol)
Joined 11/2020

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Thank you for taking the time to read my work!

Currently working on two series:
*Kingdom on a Cloud
*The Other Side (collab w/VirginaTechGirl101)
Read them PLEASE! XD

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After you're done here, go read my real-life friend BriRiley's writing! And my WtW friends Ava Marie and VirginiaTechGirl101! They are all super talented. :)

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Don't hesitate to ask if you want a review, comment, whatever! I love getting to know all the awesome writers on here, and helping you any way I can!

Want to collab? Just let me know! I'd love to! :)

The World Isn't Perfect (Possible Comp Piece) (Please Review)

April 10, 2021

FREE WRITING

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Give love to your neighbor
Give love to your friends
Give love to your family
Until the very end
 
But it isn't very easy
Sometimes we have fights
Or don't take the time
To tell them goodnight

If the world was perfect
Like we wish it was
We'd greet our neighbors
With cookies and hugs

Instead of "Hello,"
"What's your name again?"
We'd help them through 
Hard times and share the pain

If the world was perfect
We wouldn't disagree
We'd have the same views
And then share a cup of tea

This world isn't perfect
That, I understand
But it doesn't have to be
We could make a plan

Do one more thoughtful thing
Or kindness every day
And don't forget the people
Who gave it all away

Their things, homes and lives
And everything they had
It made them feel so happy
Not miserable or sad

It doesn't take much effort
But in some simple ways
We can do our part
To make the world a better place.
This might be my entry in the competition? Idk yet. Advice? This took like 15 minutes, so don't feel bad to tell me you think I should start from scratch. I am not sure what I think of this.

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7 Comments
  • BriRiley

    Re: Ikr!? I have talked one on one with all of those people and they are amazing!! And that makes sense XD I texted you about it, haha. Well at least we don’t have to deal with it anymore. :)


    9 days ago
  • BriRiley

    The fifth stanza is awesome! Good job!


    about 1 month ago
  • Ava Marie

    This is really good!


    about 1 month ago
  • _Delphiruns2theocean_

    Re: Whew thanks :)


    about 1 month ago
  • Blue Jay

    I like this piece. I will go review it right now (and if not in the next few days).


    about 1 month ago
  • _Delphiruns2theocean_

    Re: Thanks and np! It might be in a few days tho...is that alright?


    about 1 month ago
  • ☃︎ KatelynsCupcakes ☃︎

    Re: Thank you so much! Really appreciate it!


    about 1 month ago