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Can I just say HOLY! I'm very impressed by this poem, the imagery that you intertwined into your writing, the full circle ending, the fluidity of your words every single line. I love it all. I am left feeling a sense of warmth after this poem, and as I was reading it I recalled every time I thought I would end, every time I felt like stopping. But I also thought of every time I came treading back, and begun once more.
My favorite line (or rather part) of your poem is
"and even when the sun has drained from the world,
the moon lights your way and paints sterling on the waters;
stars don’t always appear in the sky " This line resonates with me so much.
I think you have done great so far.
Beautiful! Good luck, I think this is a great poem!