Cornflower Burst

United States

May the odds be ever in your favor.
May the force be with you.
Live long and prosper.
Stay back! You don't know what you're dealing with!

Message to Readers

Wow, 25 words really are very few. Republished this because I wanted to change a line. I would love feedback on this piece.

Faded Flowery Skirt

April 8, 2021

PROMPT: 25 Words

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There was a knock. The girl sitting on the chair wrenched her faded flowery skirt between her fingers. The handle turned, and the door opened.

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7 Comments
  • Sanjana Sunilkumar

    Oh my... that was just... Ah, this is so well written! Its... ah, I don't know... but... how can you... ah...


    5 months ago
  • Nyla

    Ooooh I like this- it leaves so much open to the imagination and great descriptions with the skirt!
    RE: Thank you!


    6 months ago
  • only_a_mirage (bird)

    re: thank you!! OMG ANOTHER PERCY JACKSON FAN AHHHHHHH YAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!! see you in cabin six too!!!


    6 months ago
  • WrenBirdWrites

    Re: Thanks so much for your likes and comment! I'm so glad you like my poem :D


    6 months ago
  • Parisienne

    Re: awhhh thank you so much! I'm going to keep an eye out for your work too...you capture so much in so few words! Hope you're having a good day :)
    (Love your UN btw)


    6 months ago
  • Parisienne

    Ooooh suspense! I just want to know more :)


    6 months ago
  • bhumi

    re : thanks!


    6 months ago