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This is a very refreshing poem; it really reminds me of an early morning stroll, taking in the essence of a seaside city in the dark. It makes you think - everyone has their own story and purpose, and sometimes we forget that.
'But the same canvas and palette' - You get a real sense of community in this line. You have managed to dig up an important message in a single line - very impressive!
The sensory detail is excellent - I can picture every setting portrayed in this poem. Perhaps a few short sentences/one word phrases will encourage the reader to stop and consider what this poem means to them.
This is an amazing piece! You should be very proud of this!
I'm unsure whether punctuation was intentionally missed, but it works very well either way :) Good luck to you!