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This piece left a really good impression of life to me. In the end, I really did feel that this really understands how life goes.
My favorite line was ¨ If you let yourself fall in this race You´ll lose every chance to win back your place¨
I see a few issues like...in my favorite line for example ¨If you ever let yourself fall in the race, you´ĺl lose every chance to win back your place.¨ There should be a comma after race and a period at the end of the sentence.
You are an AMAZING writer. I hope I can see other beautiful pieces you make.:3:3
Overall, I enjoyed reading this piece and hope you have a good day!:3:3