I am a huge bookworm!
love pasta!
hate orange & chocolate combo..
gemini :)
and if i ever had to choose a power, it 'd be either telepathy or invisibility.
have a nice day!!

Message to Readers

i would love any feedback and constructive criticism.


April 7, 2021

I suppose life cannot be life
Without a little bit of pain,
We all experience it ,
Headache, ankle sprain.

Perhaps more hurting,
Are the ones from inside,
Betrayal, heartbreak,
Getting over someone who died

But I suppose life would not be life
Without a little bit of joy, 
Friends and achievements
Filling up the void,

Of any hollow hole,
So bitter, so hateful,
Actually enjoying life
And feeling grateful,

An obstacle remains not one,
When you have someone by your side,
Let good people into your heart,
Experience the roller-coaster that is life.

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  • Busssy.Beee

    aww, this is so incredibly well-written!!

    6 months ago
  • Nyla

    I really like this- your rhyming is perfect and the lines are practically the same length (both together is so hard to accomplish!) And it's so sweet at the ending as well! "An obstacle remains not one/When you have someone by your side" is so sweet a sentiment! RE: Awww thank you so so much!!

    6 months ago
  • Mespotz

    RE: Ahhh another SHERlocked WtW author... and you're a Gemini. I'm following you now.

    6 months ago
  • Chloe_Cat

    Also, I agree. Orange and chocolate is a horrible combination.

    6 months ago
  • Chloe_Cat

    This was really really good. You voiced your thoughts beautifully.

    6 months ago