amandaorange

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hopeful romantic | 16 | she/her | still figuring life out | joined july 2020
"We keep living anyway. We rise and we fall and we break and we make our mistakes."

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The Golden Girl and The Skeleton Boy

April 12, 2021

She was a graveyard skeleton that halloween
(the last halloween that made any difference)
golden skin and bright eyes contrasting the costume in the dead night
in the dead forest

He was smooth smiles and warm laughter
distracting her from the fact that his face was only bone

They sat there in the forest for hours
talking about all things human
life and the validity of what they’d always been taught
(the long-forgotten ‘do not enter’ sign became a silent companion)
as did i, i suppose
the lone observer to their moonlit meeting

Confronted by the realization
that this was never my story at all
as much as it was theirs
the golden girl and the skeleton boy

At long last as they moved onto the subject of love
(she said she didn’t believe in it)
i backed away, keeping my footsteps quiet
(he looked at her like he wanted to change her mind)

I looked up at the stars as their voices faded behind me
and wondered where their story would end
and hoped it would withstand the coming daylight
(but what a shame)
the shining curves of her skull were only face paint
and he 
was long dead

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4 Comments
  • In Which Yaya Writes

    I just submitted a review! Would you mind reviewing my piece, “what the biggest eyes of vision see”? Thanks! https://writetheworld.com/groups/1/shared/228348/version/484450


    26 days ago
  • nolongeractive

    Wow, I just love this piece and all of the meaningful impact that lies within it; in addition, your talent is portrayed so effortlessly in this piece and I love all of the diction in it; you have so much talent and I cannot wait to see what else you write!


    28 days ago
  • In Which Yaya Writes

    I’m gonna review this!


    28 days ago
  • Coeur

    Woow...this is so pretty and such a cool metaphor!!


    28 days ago