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Heard the only way to get better at writing was to write. So here we are... Anyway, if anyone revises any of my stuff I'll return the favor

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I'm really not happy with the word choice in the second line but I'm not sure what to replace it with. Any and all suggestions are welcome, not sure why I'm writing about a rotten peach but I'm sure there's a metaphor somewhere. Wasted potential or whatever

Sweet like rotten wine

April 4, 2021

FREE WRITING

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rosy pink syrup dripped down her chin as
ivory white teeth tore into golden flesh
hollow amber eyes stare straight ahead as
slender fingers dig into grey rotting skin
a putrid stain on a sunrise sky

and down the street floats the scent of the sweetest peach wine 




 

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