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I really like how a lot of the lines have a nearness in syllables because it reads like rhymes, even when there are none.
I think you've done a really great job of explaining everything to do with this piece. Although if you really wanted to, you could definitely add more descriptions of the actual graveyard as you do really well with the feelings, there isn't too much setting the scene. You could describe anything like the rows of graves or the tombstones, really up to you but that would just help the reader really imagine this place a bit more. Of course, it's totally great right now as well!
It's awesome that this is based on real-life- those pieces are always the best! I really loved this, I think there's a lot of descriptions throughout and a very haunting, melancholy feel. Great job :)