Jasmin khawar

India

~She/her~
ᴛʀʏɪɴɢ ᴛᴏ ʟɪQᴜᴇꜰʏ ꜱᴛᴀʀꜱ ᴀɴᴅ ᴍᴏᴏɴ
ᴡʜᴀᴛ ᴀʙᴏᴜᴛ ʏᴏᴜ?

I might be annoying sometimes :/

Message to Readers

Ahh this is not that good i guess (°_°)

Lovely illusions

December 13, 2021

FREE WRITING

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Dancing in a blank space
mirrors of illusions
mist covered the heaven quietly
after seeing the stars in the ocean
I sank,
touching the moonlight.

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11 Comments
  • NightRain

    This is mystical and just overall gives off an ethereal vibe


    3 months ago
  • ramenoodles

    I love how mysterious yet beautiful this even though it's so short. Being able to pack lots of emotion in one stanza is talent. Love it!!
    Re: Thanks for the kind response!


    8 months ago
  • Anne Blackwood

    Re: Things won't be okay, but I will be, and thank you so much for the love <3


    8 months ago
  • SUSHmita

    Re: Ahhh!! Thank you so much <3 <3 you're AMAZING!


    9 months ago
  • @thestupidbard

    so cool! :)


    about 1 year ago
  • Mena

    This is such a good visual to read if that makes sense, I loved it!! <3333 re: also thankyou love that means so much :)


    about 1 year ago
  • roseCbeta

    The last part was just perfect, "I sank, touching the moonlight."
    re: Thank you! <3


    about 1 year ago
  • imsaral

    This is a nice, Heart touching poem


    about 1 year ago
  • nolongeractive

    I love this!! It is such an interesting title and concept and I read it like five times! It is so magical and really moved me; you have so much talent.


    over 1 year ago
  • Cosmogyral

    Jaz, my love, you render me speechless. gorgeous and show-stopping as ever :)


    over 1 year ago
  • sese

    This was short yet profound. You truly can capture a sensuous essence in very few words. Great work!


    over 1 year ago