Jasmin khawar

India

ᴛʀʏɪɴɢ ᴛᴏ ʟɪQᴜᴇꜰʏ ꜱᴛᴀʀꜱ ᴀɴᴅ ᴍᴏᴏɴ
ᴡʜᴀᴛ ᴀʙᴏᴜᴛ ʏᴏᴜ?
•~•
ᴡᴇʟʟ, ᴜɴꜰᴏʀᴛᴜɴᴀᴛᴇʟʏ ɪ ꜱᴏʟɪᴅɪꜰɪᴇᴅ ᴛʜᴇᴍ •_•

Message to Readers

Ahh this is not that good i guess (°_°)

Lovely illusions

August 2, 2021

FREE WRITING

12
Dancing in a blank space
mirrors of illusions
mist covered the heaven quietly
after seeing the stars in the ocean
I sank,
touching the moonlight.

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6 Comments
  • Mena

    This is such a good visual to read if that makes sense, I loved it!! <3333 re: also thankyou love that means so much :)


    7 days ago
  • Rose Beta

    The last part was just perfect, "I sank, touching the moonlight."
    re: Thank you! <3


    7 days ago
  • imsaral

    This is a nice, Heart touching poem


    13 days ago
  • nolongeractive

    I love this!! It is such an interesting title and concept and I read it like five times! It is so magical and really moved me; you have so much talent.


    4 months ago
  • Cosmogyral

    Jaz, my love, you render me speechless. gorgeous and show-stopping as ever :)


    4 months ago
  • sese

    This was short yet profound. You truly can capture a sensuous essence in very few words. Great work!


    4 months ago