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shadows are fragile creatures
Written By: Avril
April 3, 2021
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Woww I love the way you describe this fierce shadow and then cast a doubt in the readers mind at the last line with a simple sentence too!
RE: Awww thank you!!
Aw of course! And haha no worries, I’m always forgetting who to respond to- hence me being like 3 days late on replys sometimes. Although I guess you’re lucky this time XD Oooh awesome! ahh, I’m kind of boring, I just live in Southern Ontario :( What about you?
Ahhhh this is so great! I think the text gives such a shivery, insecure feeling, and then the message box ties it up so gorgeously!
Re: thank you!! I always get nervous about poetry ahah, but the idea came to me like midnight the day before the prompt was due (ah don’t they all) and then I rewrote the whole piece hah. I’m so happy you got a really powerful flip, and your comment made me feel so proud :)
Sending you happy vibes and midnight ideas :D
This is so good and such an interesting topic! Your pieces are always so unique! Amazing work!
Re: If it's not too much trouble that would be great! Thankyou in advance :).
Re: Thankyou!! I would say that's the vibe I was going for :). This is a great piece, by the way! Is what it says in your profile still true? I could always use reviews, no pressure though.
wow. this is powerful.
re: Thanks! :)
re: thank you! i was inspired by a book i was reading haha; so glad you liked it; have an amazing day :)
omg this is really powerful! The last line just hits me so hard! And yea I do agree that shadows are fragile creatures :)
Ooh this is really thought-provoking and so well written! That last line is super powerful - well done :)
Re: thanks so much for your lovely comment <3
thank you so much for the review!! i loved all of your feedback, and i will definitely incorporate some of it into the next draft! thank you so much for taking the time out of your day to write a review for me :) have an amazing day!
wish upon a tree
ooh i love this, & that last line is amazing.
re: thank you so much!!
Re: Thank you!!!
This is really good! The last line really gets you
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