"It's a dangerous business, Frodo, going out your front door."

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Message to Readers

shadows are fragile creatures

Treadmill Thoughts

April 3, 2021



The shadow girl on the wall runs with her head held high. Shoulders back, arms pumping to the rhythm of her footsteps, wire trailing down from her ear. She looks steady, brave. Strong.

Is she?  


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  • April 3, 2021 - 7:38pm (Now Viewing)

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  • Nyla

    Woww I love the way you describe this fierce shadow and then cast a doubt in the readers mind at the last line with a simple sentence too!
    RE: Awww thank you!!
    Aw of course! And haha no worries, I’m always forgetting who to respond to- hence me being like 3 days late on replys sometimes. Although I guess you’re lucky this time XD Oooh awesome! ahh, I’m kind of boring, I just live in Southern Ontario :( What about you?

    7 days ago
  • barelybear

    Ahhhh this is so great! I think the text gives such a shivery, insecure feeling, and then the message box ties it up so gorgeously!
    Re: thank you!! I always get nervous about poetry ahah, but the idea came to me like midnight the day before the prompt was due (ah don’t they all) and then I rewrote the whole piece hah. I’m so happy you got a really powerful flip, and your comment made me feel so proud :)
    Sending you happy vibes and midnight ideas :D

    9 days ago

    This is so good and such an interesting topic! Your pieces are always so unique! Amazing work!

    14 days ago
  • BizzleWrites

    Re: If it's not too much trouble that would be great! Thankyou in advance :).

    15 days ago
  • BizzleWrites

    Re: Thankyou!! I would say that's the vibe I was going for :). This is a great piece, by the way! Is what it says in your profile still true? I could always use reviews, no pressure though.

    15 days ago
  • sci-Fi

    wow. this is powerful.

    15 days ago
  • psithurism

    re: Thanks! :)

    15 days ago
  • gabimarie

    re: thank you! i was inspired by a book i was reading haha; so glad you liked it; have an amazing day :)

    16 days ago
  • Zirong

    omg this is really powerful! The last line just hits me so hard! And yea I do agree that shadows are fragile creatures :)

    16 days ago
  • ect.13

    Ooh this is really thought-provoking and so well written! That last line is super powerful - well done :)

    Re: thanks so much for your lovely comment <3

    17 days ago
  • gabimarie

    thank you so much for the review!! i loved all of your feedback, and i will definitely incorporate some of it into the next draft! thank you so much for taking the time out of your day to write a review for me :) have an amazing day!

    18 days ago
  • wish upon a tree

    ooh i love this, & that last line is amazing.

    re: thank you so much!!

    18 days ago
  • Ava Marie

    Re: Thank you!!!
    This is really good! The last line really gets you

    19 days ago