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this is such a poignant, personal and deeply moving piece. it speaks to a topic that I wish wasn't relevant in the way that it is. I think you have captured the voices and thoughts of many by sharing yours.
I think a little more in the first paragraph about how you reacted to the "bullying" would help further with the emotion and personality of the piece. also a little more at the ending. your footnote is heartbreaking and I think parts of it would fit really well somewhere in the piece itself.
all suggestions are just sort of nit picky and what i would change if this were my piece. feel free to disregard whatever you disagree with, even if it's this whole review haha :')
again, beautiful writing that shares you with the world and leaves you feeling vulnerable is extremely moving and powerful.