Disabled (chronically ill)
Highly Sensitive Person
XXFJ, Melancholic-Sanguine, ambivert
I think the odd line breaks are interesting, but I'm concerned that in this piece they're just a gimmick that takes away from the emotional impact. Should I rewrite this piece and save that technique for another one? Be brutally honest please.
Written By: Anne Blackwood
March 31, 2021