kimsdaydreams

United States

16 years old, (She/Her/Hers)
High School Junior in California. Write poems as a hobby :)

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Everything is possible if you just stop calling it impossible.

My Dream

March 31, 2021

FREE WRITING

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I was walking through a field of lavender
Lavender was all I could see all around
That beautiful color alomost blinded me
I wouldn't be able to see you today 
The smell was so sweet and intoxicating
The wind brushing against my sking 
Made it so that I kept being pushed back
And even that bright red sun was against me
It burned me from deep within, why?
I had to find you, I had to get to you
Yet everything seemed to warn me that
Maybe you weren't there anymore
And when I finally saw you standing there
In front of me, reaching out your warm hand
I felt a fear so great rush over me
And saw a birght light flash in front of me 
So I ould no longer see you there 
But it wasn't over yet, because
At the same time that you disappeared
I felt a thump hit my back and it hurt so much
And I heard your cry, and their cries too
I fell to the ground on to the lap of someone
Someone I held on to, hoping to rest
I pleaded for the pain to stop, for my life
Yet you still never came and I only
Woke up to find that you were never there


 

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3 Comments
  • Charisse Marison

    Oh. My. Gosh.
    This was just ABSOLUTELY BEAUTIFUL.


    6 months ago
  • Nyla

    Wow, this was so amazing! The story progressed really nicely and the ending really left me thinking! Great job!


    6 months ago
  • BriRiley

    Ohhh, so beautiful and poetic! *inserts star eyed emoji* This piece gives you the feeling of the beauty in the sene and gives you a taste of the MC story. Good job! This is awesome! Btw you forgot the c in could in the 17th sentence, i think it is? I do that all the time XD


    6 months ago