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I love how you said hope coming is as sure as a robin singing and the rain falling. I thought that was an excellent way to bring in some imagery! And using one happy thing (robin singing) and one sad thing (rain falling) was really awesome! It kind of shows that just as sad days and happy days come, hopeful days come as well!
I’m left feeling hopeful! And although your use of waiting does make it seem quite far off, it shows that it will come, surely it has to! This just made me feel really happy and I loved imagining the scene!
This was an awesome piece and I loved reading it! The simplicity just packed a punch!!