15 years old and obsessed with Agatha Christie, Sherlock Holmes (both books and series), and Divergent.
Please suggest any, absolutely anyyy good book you've read, Ill try and get on board!

Message to Readers

I really hope I haven't been insensitive in any way! I know that mental health is an extremely important and sensitive topic, and I do not want to write anything that might be insensitive or thoughtless. Please do let me know if I have handled anything wrongly, I will surely correct myself!

My Dear Hype- woman

March 31, 2021


My dear Hype-woman,
I wish I could hype you up
As well as you did me. 
I wish my words could have the effect
That yours had on me. 
I wish I could make you comfortable
Just like you made me. 
I wish I could lift your spirits 
As well as you did for me.  
I wish I could understand you
The way you understood me. 
I wish I could give you hope
Like you did to me. 

I wish you were as sure of yourself
As you were of me. 
I wish you had faith in yourself
As you did in me. 
I wish you tried to fight your demons
The way you told me. 
I wish you could feel comfortable sharing
As I did, when you were with me. 

But most of all, I wish
That you find the power
To conquer your burdens
And feel free 
Think about yourself this once
And leave everyone be.


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  • Nyla

    Wow this has such a powerful message and you wrote it so poetically, I love the repetition of "me"!

    6 months ago
  • BlueWolf (Semi Hiatus)

    This is so true. A lot of the time our harshest critics is ourselves. (maybe quote by .... can't remember...sorry.) The way I think and talk to my friends is so different to how I relate to myself. This is captured really well in this piece. I really enjoyed the repetition and the rhymes.

    6 months ago
  • astrea

    yes it sucks, i begged my parents to allow me to join my friends. big fat no. :(

    6 months ago