buddingauthor

India

15 years old and obsessed with Agatha Christie, Sherlock Holmes (both books and series), and Divergent.
She/her
Please suggest any, absolutely anyyy good book you've read, Ill try and get on board!

Message to Readers

I really hope I haven't been insensitive in any way! I know that mental health is an extremely important and sensitive topic, and I do not want to write anything that might be insensitive or thoughtless. Please do let me know if I have handled anything wrongly, I will surely correct myself!

My Dear Hype- woman

March 31, 2021

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My dear Hype-woman,
I wish I could hype you up
As well as you did me. 
I wish my words could have the effect
That yours had on me. 
I wish I could make you comfortable
Just like you made me. 
I wish I could lift your spirits 
As well as you did for me.  
I wish I could understand you
The way you understood me. 
I wish I could give you hope
Like you did to me. 

I wish you were as sure of yourself
As you were of me. 
I wish you had faith in yourself
As you did in me. 
I wish you tried to fight your demons
The way you told me. 
I wish you could feel comfortable sharing
As I did, when you were with me. 

But most of all, I wish
That you find the power
To conquer your burdens
And feel free 
Think about yourself this once
And leave everyone be.
 

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3 Comments
  • Nyla

    Wow this has such a powerful message and you wrote it so poetically, I love the repetition of "me"!


    6 months ago
  • BlueWolf (Semi Hiatus)

    This is so true. A lot of the time our harshest critics is ourselves. (maybe quote by .... can't remember...sorry.) The way I think and talk to my friends is so different to how I relate to myself. This is captured really well in this piece. I really enjoyed the repetition and the rhymes.


    6 months ago
  • astrea

    yes it sucks, i begged my parents to allow me to join my friends. big fat no. :(


    6 months ago