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I love the repetition of "let me tell you a secret" because it brought the whole piece together and it made the piece very coherent. I think that the vividness of this piece is something I admire and hope I can achieve one day
I would like to know why you feel the way you feel,, why the fear
ur footnote is so cute hey I hope u keep writing please never stop
- from half across the world,, ari