I am a huge bookworm!
hate orange & chocolate combo..
and if i ever had to choose a power, it 'd be either telepathy or invisibility.
have a nice day!!
Written By: astrea
March 29, 2021
PROMPT: Home’s Essence
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I absolutely adore the first line :)
Sonder Fen and Mead (#words)
Re: there is now a sequel to Hope of Travan if you want to check it out! It's called Death of Travan. (BTW, there probably be more sequels after this one too)
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re: oh thanks! :D
BlueWolf (Semi Hiatus)
Re: Yeah... I've been on an extended break for a while. Exams have been a lot. I have just bee overwhelmed with everything. But I'll hopefully be back at least for the holidays. How are you?
I like how you establish that the home is the people who live there. That is awesome! I really like the insight the reader gets into your and your families personality. I also really like the ending line!
Ah, I relate to this on some levels. It's beautifully written!
Re: Happy belated Holi to you too! I celebrated a little with the friends who live in my society whom I meet everyday, but we weren't able to go full out because, well, the pandemic. It sucks:(
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