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I am a huge bookworm!
love pasta!
hate orange & chocolate combo..
gemini :)
and if i ever had to choose a power, it 'd be either telepathy or invisibility.
have a nice day!!

Message to Readers

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Home

March 29, 2021

Brick, cement, paint and furniture may make up the house, but it's the people who make the home.

In my case, one working father, who loves lecturing me about consciousness.

One currently not-working mother, who nags me to follow a timetable.

One crazy brother engrossed in a device, always watching a youtuber or something and calls everything 'cringey'

One tired grandmother, who only prays and prays, religious to the core.

And then there's me in my teens, confused, moody and thinking.

We make up a strange home...
 

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7 Comments
  • ANSON REYNOLDS

    I absolutely adore the first line :)


    about 1 month ago
  • Sonder Fen and Mead (#words)

    Re: there is now a sequel to Hope of Travan if you want to check it out! It's called Death of Travan. (BTW, there probably be more sequels after this one too)


    about 1 month ago
  • SamRose

    Review group assignments have been posted! https://writetheworld.com/groups/1/shared/226489/version/478258


    about 1 month ago
  • ✧♬TwinklingLights♬✧

    re: oh thanks! :D


    about 1 month ago
  • BlueWolf (Semi Hiatus)

    Re: Yeah... I've been on an extended break for a while. Exams have been a lot. I have just bee overwhelmed with everything. But I'll hopefully be back at least for the holidays. How are you?


    about 1 month ago
  • BlueWolf (Semi Hiatus)

    I like how you establish that the home is the people who live there. That is awesome! I really like the insight the reader gets into your and your families personality. I also really like the ending line!


    about 1 month ago
  • buddingauthor

    Ah, I relate to this on some levels. It's beautifully written!
    Re: Happy belated Holi to you too! I celebrated a little with the friends who live in my society whom I meet everyday, but we weren't able to go full out because, well, the pandemic. It sucks:(


    about 1 month ago