Noah_1

United States

16
Aspiring musician and songwriter
Likes boba tea :)

Message to Readers

A little poem that I came up with.

I don't know how to kiss you.

March 29, 2021

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I wish I knew how to kiss you.

Is it softly and sweetly,
under the shade of an oak tree?
Or something deeper, more intimate,
in the dark before its too late?

Would it make you weak
if on your forehead or cheek?
Or should I hold your hips
while I kiss your lips?

I've always loved romance,
the idea of finding you with just one glance.
But no matter the picture,
color or hue,

I don't know how to kiss you.

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13 Comments
  • Avril

    Ohhh this is incredibly charming and so sweet!! The whole thing has a beautiful feeling of innocence and quiet longing. (and btw I agree with Nyla, go with the oak tree ;) haha)


    about 1 month ago
  • Nyla

    Omg awww this is sooo sweet!! Ok, I know you're not asking for actual advice but it is definitely under the shade of an oak tree! I mean how Notebook-y is that!! I love how seamlessly you incorporated these rhymes! awww, this is just so romantic!!


    about 1 month ago
  • VirginaTechGirl101

    How beautiful! I love the simplicity of it all. But I must ask, what is boba tea? (I feel so out of place with all the boba tea lovers, lol.)


    about 1 month ago
  • ???

    aww this is so awesome!!


    about 1 month ago
  • anemoia (#words)

    honestly beautiful yes i wonder too


    about 1 month ago
  • serein

    this was so intimately beautiful...I love the simplicity!'
    also i know everyone in the comments is talking about boba tea lol but haha that stuff SLAPS


    about 1 month ago
  • sci-Fi

    awww this is super cute *smiles in reluctantly sappy teenage girl*
    I've never tried boba tea... i want to tho


    about 1 month ago
  • BriRiley

    If are asking for advice, idk XD but this is really cute! And so romantic XD haha, good job!


    about 1 month ago
  • ✧♬TwinklingLights♬✧

    lol


    about 1 month ago
  • ✧♬TwinklingLights♬✧

    THIS IS SO CUTE!n elhwflawegflwasvflksrhbflckesbrgflkhvse
    idk man
    I've never kissed anyone
    tho I practice on my hand


    about 1 month ago
  • Ava Marie

    This is so good!!!


    about 1 month ago
  • Draco Malfoy

    This is great! I love it so much.
    Btw I love boba tea as well!


    about 1 month ago
  • 4ExtraShotsOfEspresso

    This is super cool! I like boba tea too, preferably honeydew flavored :3


    about 1 month ago