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Thanks to McK13 for the word 'Barbecue' to start this piece!

Please suggest another one in the comments if you'd like, if it rhymes well and is different from the others in the series I'll most likely pick it :)

10th piece in the series!!

Rhymes With 'Barbecue'

March 31, 2021

FREE WRITING

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On a hot day, I happened to cook some barbecue.

The sky was nice and blue,

And I really had nothing else to do.

I brew some stew,

Put on my shoe,

And picked some tomatoes that I grew.

I thought briefly about Winnie the Pooh. 

What would he do, on a day so beautiful where the wind gently blew?

I finally ate my meal, staring at the crows who flew.

The bright flashing colors of the day, dimming in their hue.

I sat out there for awhile, before I decided to bid the night adieu

With my back to the moon, I slept for another day to begin anew.



 

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22 Comments
  • The Ravenclaw Dragon

    This is so cool! It's great how you did a whole series with it. You could do one that rhymes with Covid-19. Keep on writing!


    5 months ago
  • Anne Blackwood

    Re: Thanks!


    6 months ago
  • useless :)

    i love this haha


    6 months ago
  • happy butterfly

    replying: aw thank you so much<3


    6 months ago
  • Writing4Life

    Amazing haha


    6 months ago
  • SamRose

    Aw this is both cute and impressive XD Rhyming is hard. I love the Winnie the Pooh part lol


    6 months ago
  • Tachi

    OOP- This is is so cute <3


    6 months ago
  • Anne Blackwood

    Re: Aww thanks F'Otter. :)
    You're welcome!


    6 months ago
  • happy butterfly

    ahhhh i love this so much, its my favourite one you've done so far:):) "I thought briefly about Winnie the Pooh." is the cutest thing ever!
    word recommendation: one


    6 months ago
  • Anne Blackwood

    This is my favorite addition to the series!
    "The bright flashing colors of the day, dimming in their hue." LOVELY


    6 months ago
  • Rohan’s Defender (Semi-Active)

    Re: of course! :) I’m well, thanks!


    6 months ago
  • SunV

    We're on 10!!! I love this rhyme, and how it has this deeper meaning......

    I was going to suggest 'Fool', but then saw it was already given, so..... What about 'Math'?

    I'm sorry, that's really random, but I kinds like math (don't kill me) and I'd find it fun :)


    6 months ago
  • Rohan’s Defender (Semi-Active)

    Love it! Wow, the 10th one... still going strong! :D What about “explode”, as a kind of throwback to piece #1?
    How are you doing, FO?


    6 months ago
  • sci-Fi

    I love how you sat down to write a piece about barbecue and still managed to make it poetic XD


    6 months ago
  • Cici'sTimes

    *opens the dictionary... and your lottery word is 'sickle'


    6 months ago
  • Lata.B

    Ok your rhyming skills are literally so amazing and this is actually so good!!


    6 months ago
  • (sk)eyesofocher

    And now I’m hungry. Hahaha
    I love thisssss


    6 months ago
  • katnissromanoff

    I LOVED reading this!!! Amazing!!


    6 months ago
  • ArtCat

    OK, this is awesome! How do you even come up with so many rhymes for barbecue and still make it flow like a story?! XD So cool!


    6 months ago
  • McK13

    I absolutely love this piece and the entire series! It's very creative and lighthearted! And I'm so glad that you chose my suggestion, thanks :)


    6 months ago
  • WrenBirdWrites

    LOVE THIS hehehheehehehehehehe


    6 months ago
  • ~madeline~

    YeS! I LOVE this series :) You should do something spring-y... Rhymes with April Fools or Easter or something like that.


    6 months ago