(sk)eyesofocher

United States

"I know a place where the bruised and broken
Live like the kings and the queens of tragedy."

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hey! It's ya 'obbit, lin.
We're all mad here.
she/her....? (I'll get back to you on that.)
~14~
we stan succulents names Gerard Way here.
we stan a lot of things.
including you, dear reader.

broken

March 29, 2021

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what's wrong with me 
Am I so broken 
that I can't find a way out 
what's wrong with me 
one way
or another 
im broken 
a piece 
of shattered glass
defected
what's wrong with me 
I want to be 
nothing but normal 
but I am anything but 
and if that's the case 
I am broken 
what's wrong with me 
can I keep it all in
without exploding 
can someone else find me 
in my discomfort 
what's wrong with me?
having a bad day.

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9 Comments
  • beth r.

    re: the piece is super over dramatic- you're so effortlessly cool, you'll be totally fine gurl


    about 1 month ago
  • beth r.

    dang it i'm late to comfort you
    anyways, i'm giving you all the hugs and croutons because you are very loved and very not broken *aggressively throws croutons at you*


    about 1 month ago
  • FantasyOtter12

    aww bad days are...well bad. I hope it gets better lin sry i didnt see this sooner <33 (and i echo the rest of the comments nothings wrong w/ u ur all good :))


    about 1 month ago
  • Rohan’s Defender (Hiatus)

    Re: yessssssss!!! :D I agree


    about 1 month ago
  • First Name Last Name

    re: AAA THANK YOUUU next part is coming soonn!! <33


    about 1 month ago
  • Rohan’s Defender (Hiatus)

    Re: hey! Thank you so much!
    I’m well, but soo tired. How are you?


    about 1 month ago
  • Just_A_Memory

    There's absolutely nothing wrong with you, hon! I feel this way often myself. I hope things start looking up for you soon! <3


    about 1 month ago
  • Kasilee

    Nothing is wrong with u at all! Beautiful writing!!!


    about 1 month ago
  • ✧♬TwinklingLights♬✧

    you're gonna be okay <3
    we all have bad days


    about 1 month ago