gabimarie

United States

17
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ENFP-T
armystay
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Message from Writer

addicted to coffee and late night drives

probably screaming over bang chan's duality or jisung's cheeks honestly

also remember to stay hydrated, get enough sleep, and don't skip meals! :)

get to know me here at my book cover:
https://writetheworld.com/groups/1/shared/220825/version/512967

chapter one of my completed book "a realistic love" is below:
https://writetheworld.com/groups/1/shared/233964/version/496184

you were the highlight of my night, but I wasn't yours

March 29, 2021

FREE WRITING

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I've denied it for years
but I'm watching you from across the room
the way you throw your head back
    when you laugh
the way your eyes squinch together
    when you're embarrassed
the way your legs spread open
    one ankle on the other knee
you look over to my corner
of the room and I breathe in
swallow
meet your gaze
a smile plays on your lips
you raise an eyebrow
and look away when someone laughs
I sigh
disappointed but relieved
we're just friends
but friends don't look at friends this way
the way I look at you

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4 Comments
  • Starlitskies

    Also, I love the quote in your bio. It's one of my favourites. :)


    6 months ago
  • Starlitskies

    Omg this is so beautifully written and so engaging!
    "you look over to my corner
    of the room and I breathe in
    swallow
    meet your gaze" - my heart skipped a beat when I read this after the build up. You've made it really powerful by the small yet poignant details you've given like how he laughs, how he's embarrassed and how his legs are crossed. Especially the last one because most writers tend to focus on facial expressions and it's nice when someone writes about body language too.


    6 months ago
  • Kasilee

    I love how a picture can play out perfectly in my head when I read your writing! Amazing job!


    6 months ago
  • Ava Marie

    This is so well written, and sad, but beautiful


    6 months ago