Abby11

United States

Aspiring writer/scientist
Always changing taste in music
Favorite book- Red Queen
Currently reading- Sarah J Mass’s Throne of Glass series

Message to Readers

I dug this up in a pile of my writing from two years ago. I'd like input on how to make the poem flow better :)

My Heart Shall Break

March 29, 2021

FREE WRITING

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Even when the sun explodes
And the earth turns to molten lava
My love for you shall not falter.
I hope even through rain or shine
Or sudden death yours shall hold true,
For even if one shall break
At least we know we got through it together.

And even if you never loved me to begin
I will always know that mine held true
From the first time I saw you.
And I know for you my heart shall not break
But for the people that I hold in my wake.
The people that I had once loved and adored
But now my heart falls to you
My one and only true love.

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4 Comments
  • SamRose

    K, it's time for the 3rd round of the Peer Review Group! Just let me know in the comments of my most recent piece what 1-3 pieces you would like reviewed! If you don't have any, just find any piece by anyone on WtW that is seeking a peer review and give me the link to that instead! If reviewing two pieces seems a little daunting at the moment, just let me know if you would like to skip this round. I think as it gets closer to the end of the school year we should probably have that be an option so we can make sure all the reviews get done. :) Tysm in advance!


    22 days ago
  • SamRose

    Review group assignments have been posted! https://writetheworld.com/groups/1/shared/226489/version/478258


    about 1 month ago
  • SamRose

    Re: Ty!!


    about 1 month ago
  • Ava Marie

    This is so beautiful


    about 1 month ago