_CatholicWarrior_

Canada

Lina~~Catholic~~Female~~14~~Medieval Geek~~Sword Passionate~~Book Worm~~Sailor~~Homeschooled~~#Pro-life~~#LatinMass~~#BringBackTheVintage
Currently reading: Light Of The Last, The Bronte Sisters, BrotherBand book 8, Anne Of Green Gables, Eldest.

Confused

March 29, 2021

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I'm so confused. 
Two brothers, one heart.
Two crushes, one love. 
One's I like, and the other has a crush on me. 
One thinks of me only as a friend, the other looks beyond that. 
What, oh what should I do?
What can I do?
I don't know, oh I don't know.
My brain says, 'Hurry up, and pick!'
My heart remains silent.
There'll be other boys, but none like these.
Its a problem thats weighs down my soul, day to day.
My heart beats, but for whom?

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12 Comments
  • _CatholicWarrior_

    Thanks Nyla! Its a true one! Its does make sense! So far I am!


    6 months ago
  • Nyla

    Awww I really like this! What a story! You write it really emotionally.
    Also, I’m not sure if you know this yet but to respond to people you go onto their profile and comment “Re: message” on one of their posts otherwise they won’t get a notification. I hope that makes sense- it took me a long time to figure it out as well! Anyways, welcome to WTW, hope you like it :)


    6 months ago
  • _CatholicWarrior_

    Writng4Life, its pretty cool! I don't really understand some stuff, like the competions. or studios, but other then that its good. There is some stuff I would change, like to be able to 'respond' to people in the chat, and some add-ons to the writing section. I'm not on alot, because I really don't have any ideas of what to write.


    6 months ago
  • Writing4Life

    Oops *world


    6 months ago
  • Writing4Life

    How are you enjoying write the wrold?


    6 months ago
  • _CatholicWarrior_

    Thanks for all the great comments on this guys! I litterally wrote as I went, so I didn't know if it'd be that good!


    6 months ago
  • Figwit [HIATUS]

    Such raw emotion in this piece! I love it!


    6 months ago
  • Writing4Life

    Thanks for joining :)


    6 months ago
  • Writing4Life

    This is great!


    6 months ago
  • Odyssey

    Also, I love your profile pic!


    6 months ago
  • ChimChim_1

    I definitely get the idea of what's happening. Welcome to WtW hope ya enjoy writing here!


    6 months ago
  • Odyssey

    Great poem! Welcome to Write the World. :)


    6 months ago