anne_shirley04

Australia

HIGH ON LIFE

His First

March 28, 2021

FREE WRITING

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the force of the current;   he saw firelight,
a gleam                    a glimmer   brightness

The hero


     singing on her head

                 It spared her
             in his need. 



                  he never lost heart.
with his bare
hands

                  he would have to rely
                  So must a man do

        Life doesn't cost him a thought
                                 warming
                       gripped
                                   frenzy:
she rose 
                                    embrace.
    sure-footed          felt suddenly daunted.
the strongest              stumbled and fell.



                         the balance

he saw




                  her neck-bone

                    she fell

A light appeared            brightened
the way the sky does                candle



                            prove its worth


   he'd come 

suprised
and                       carried away,

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  • acrosstheuniverse28

    Your writing is so beautiful! "A light appeared / brightened / the way the sky does
    / candle" -- breathtaking!!!


    24 days ago