sunny.solaya

United States

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~aspiring young writer (15)
~e-girl/emo as hell
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Message from Writer

falling in love is pointless until someone can look at you like you're their entire world.
i'd wait forever for the perfect person.

Mother Dearest

March 25, 2021

FREE WRITING

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Mother sat across from me while I sipped my morning cup of coffee. 
' ' How are you, mother, dear? ' ' I asked between sips. 
No answer. 
' ' Awfully silent this morning, are we? ' ' 
Still, no answer. 
I reached over to hold her hand. 
She was frigid cold. 
Maybe I should have buried her the night she died...
She'd be warmer in a grave. 

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5 Comments
  • useless :)

    re: no problem, and ty!


    6 months ago
  • useless :)

    the plot twist was just...
    ahh. unexpected but creepy in a good way. definitely makes you want to know more!


    6 months ago
  • mindfruit (semi-active)

    Oooh, creepy! I like this! Did not expect that ending. I second Nyla, I definitely need to know more. amazing work


    6 months ago
  • ✧♬TwinklingLights♬✧

    woah! Plot twist
    this is amazing
    you need more recognition


    6 months ago
  • Nyla

    OMG noooo- this is sooo creepy! But at the same time, I have to know more! Amazing job!


    6 months ago