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I really love the use of repetition! It really enforces what you’re trying to say! and the message is plain awesome!!
I think this piece is really good as is. I left a few suggestion things on the piece for tiny nitpicks but I think it’s really well-done the way it is! If you wanted to, you could try to find a way to work in saying “not all men” to go against that catchphrase people say (“I hate all men”)
This was an awesome piece and I loved reading it! You’re very lucky to have such amazing men in your life and I definitely agree with your message, the men in my life have always pushed me up and helped me! There are definitely bad men out there but fortunately, neither you nor I have met any :)
Also for all the comments I made, feel free to ignore them, you know your writing best and I am just giving you one reader's opinion :)