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The topic was well chosen and I love the flow of the poem. It started out as I expected but when it got to "They lied," I realized the poem was in a different direction. I applaud the way you construct your words, especially the last 2 lines.
This is already so good, the flow is awesome. Nothing needs to be changed.
I totally get the last part about the shoulders! Some subjects we learn in school aren't even useful, and schools should teach a self defense class.