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I would really appreciate any and all thoughts on how to improve this. I'm submitting it for a poetry competition and would love any help whatsoever. Just keep it respectful please :)

Dear Vida Rose | Message box first please!!

March 23, 2021

FREE WRITING

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Dear Vida Rose,

I hope I can be your friend
I hope we hang out all the time
And make fun of the fake girls on Instagram
I hope we talk all the time
I hope you know I'll talk to you about anything
You may not like it, but you'll have to love your brother Sam

I know things didn't work out the first time
I know you may have millions of questions
But I'm here to make you happy
I know you might feel alone
I know everything might be confusing
I'll help you when days are crappy

I'll cry when I drive you to kindergarten the first time
I'll cry when we take your prom pictures
But I'll try to be cool
I'll cry when you tell me about your first crush
I'll cry when you leave home for good
Just remember I'm only one text, call, or FaceTime away

Sometimes school sucks
And words do hurt more than sticks and stones
Sometimes people suck
And want to break your bones
Sometimes life sucks
And I'll talk to you in soothing tones

I'll always love you
I'll do my best
I'll support whatever choices you make
I'll make sure you're doing okay

Just remember:
I'm only one text, call, or FaceTime away.

Love, 
Your future Mom

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14 Comments
  • Cornflower Burst

    Wow, this is so good! Can't believe I didn't discover your work earlier.


    29 days ago
  • Yes_iKnowimShort

    re: its fine lol


    about 1 month ago
  • Someoneyouusedtoknow

    Aww, cute!


    about 1 month ago
  • Yes_iKnowimShort

    re: seriously what would I do without you? :>


    about 1 month ago
  • Cedric Diggory

    Bury sniff


    about 1 month ago
  • Ellington Stone

    Re: Omg, I'm glad you liked it. And it kinda was effortless: I have a thing called Ordinal Linguistic Personification, so months, days, numbers, and letters automatically have personalities. I just wrote it down XD


    about 1 month ago
  • Ellington Stone

    Re: Aww, thanks!!


    about 1 month ago
  • Cedric Diggory

    Sniff smile this is beautiful:') psst i published<3


    about 1 month ago
  • Yes_iKnowimShort

    re: Thank you :>


    about 2 months ago
  • Spade

    This is beautiful!


    about 2 months ago
  • thea_ivy

    Sticks and stones may break my bones but words can always hurt me...


    about 2 months ago
  • SamRose

    Re: Huh that is funny/ironic! XD


    about 2 months ago
  • SamRose

    Re: Nice! You are 13? That's the same age as my younger sis Anna. I'm 15. :)


    about 2 months ago
  • SamRose

    Re: Cool! So you have a September birthday? What year? I was born in 2005. And yes, Leo is such an awesome character! :)


    about 2 months ago