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The imagery was amazing! I loved every minute of reading this because I was so drawn into the story the author told.
I wish that each of the verses were longer. I understand that writing imagery is difficult to do without repeating yourself, but I would love to have even more to read about the way spring feels, etc.
Overall, I just loved this piece! It's so fun to read and almost got me excited for spring (even though it's my least favorite season :) ). So great job! Have an amazing day! :)