Noah_1

United States

16
Aspiring musician and songwriter
Likes boba tea :)

Message to Readers

I don't know if this makes any sense, but I tried :)

Lovely Night

March 23, 2021

PROMPT: Sijo

60
It's hard to put into words how I feel about the sky;
Loud and bright daylight, yet the night sheds a quiet light. For me?
Really, the stars are just as pretty tonight, so I write.

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18 Comments
  • Harper Stone

    Absolutely lovely!


    about 1 month ago
  • VirginaTechGirl101

    This is beautiful! I love how simple it is; yet there is a powerful message. Congrats!


    about 1 month ago
  • Awesome Sienna

    Beautiful! Congratulations on Wednesday Words!


    about 1 month ago
  • ???

    this is so simple but so awesome! congrats on Wednesday words!


    about 1 month ago
  • storie_bird

    and congrats on Wed words pick!!!


    about 1 month ago
  • storie_bird

    Ooh, such relieving - - yet the night sheds a quiet light, the stars are just as pretty tonight! -- this is so beautiful -- keep on<3333


    about 1 month ago
  • Ramses IV

    congratulations on wednesday words :)


    about 1 month ago
  • SunV

    Oh my, this is so pretty...... The sky really is so mysterious....

    And boba tea! Not very easily available where I love, but if I get my hands on it, watch out. It's the only kind of tea/coffee I love XD


    about 1 month ago
  • Writing4Life

    Beautiful! Congrats on Wednesday Words :) And I love boba tea too lolll


    about 1 month ago
  • FantasyOtter12

    Congrats!!! This is absolutely gorgeous. Also i love boba tea too. lol


    about 1 month ago
  • Mespotz

    This is beautiful! Congratulations on Wednesday Words!


    about 1 month ago
  • BriRiley

    Ooo, I love reading things about the stars! It’s one of my favorite topics!


    about 1 month ago
  • JonesyL123

    I love how you've fitted so much wonder and beauty into such a short poem! Congratulations on Wednesday words :)


    about 1 month ago
  • rwong

    woahhh this is beautiful!! congrats on wednesday words!!


    about 1 month ago
  • sci-Fi

    Congrats on wednesday words!!


    about 1 month ago
  • Ava Marie

    This is really pretty!!


    about 1 month ago
  • Yes_iKnowimShort

    I love this! Congrats on winning the Wednesday Words!


    about 1 month ago
  • Just_A_Memory

    I like it! :D


    about 2 months ago