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I really really love this!! The whole thing is so relatable and I really loved your constant emphasis of friendship being a concept moving past flaws and appearance!
I guess you could work in a bit more about the sad times, like how they help you get through it. You have so many good things and it's a really positive piece! If you wanted to add in a bit of that empowering help stuff though- you definitely could to add a bit more power but otherwise, it's perfect the way it is!!
It was an overall really beautiful and amazing piece!! Personally, I think you could do without a lot of the "the's" and "and's" to make it flow a bit better but that's a really small nitpick and ultimately up to you! I would only add them every three or so items (hopefully that makes sense XD) This piece made me feel all happy inside! Really great job!! And happy 105!!! The formatting was also amazing and really added to it! I also loved the rhymes! Really amazing :)))